Scene 0 - Ending : text

Color test of cactus

Other cactus:

BrainSheet-sensory position

 大腦－味覺

大腦－視覺




 

脊髓－觸覺

小腦－平衡

Meeting Agenda

Time: 11-7-11(Mon), 11a.m-5p.m

Venue: Y7&P

MEETING  :

refine the script

record the sound of characters

­­A=Alice

W=Witch

F=Fairy

C=Crow

M=Mirror

Scene0－仙子

小朋友，你地知唔知道大腦究竟係點樣運作架？ 唔知道？ Follow me！

Scene1 – Forest

A: 嘩!好得意啊！(delete the sense of smell) 

(A 摘花 刺到手)          

A: 哎呀! 好痛呀！

F: 你真係唔小心呀 (fing個魔法棒，支針唔見左 － 2個close up shot)

F: (Bling!)

-  F: 你地留唔留意到愛麗斯頭先既反應呢？ 如果皮膚收到危險既信號，脊髓就
     會即刻比反應 叫我地縮手

 (A, F離場)                                                  

C: 呀呀~

（hehe流眼淚 (delete the facial expression of other cactus) ，丫丫見到之後，就有憤怒的眼睛， 拎走埋朵花）

Scene2 – Witch’s house

C: 呀呀~

W: 魔鏡, 邊個傷害我棵仙人掌!  (angry facial expression)

M: 係愛麗斯

W: 我要引佢上黎先得!嘿嘿! (掉豆-close up)

Scene3 – Magic bean

A: 不如上去睇下囉!~(爬魔豆)  (look up at the beanstalk to indicate beanstalk is tall)

F: (無奈)好啦！不過你要小心d呀！

F: (Bling!)

-  F: 愛麗c爬咁高都唔跌落尼，秘訣就係 集中精神 用小腦控制平衡！
      不過你地都唔好亂學呀！真係好危險ga！

W: 嘿嘿! 佢上緊黎啦!

Scene4 – Candy House

A: 嘩! 呢間屋好靚呀~ (88卦卦周圍睇野)

F: (Bling!)

-   F: 小朋友 你地睇到咁繽紛既顏色係因為，眼睛收到既信號會經由大腦轉
      化為影像…….. (話未說完)

A: 嘩!仙 子,仙子, 你睇下！！間屋原來真係糖造架！好好味呀！ (食緊糖)

F: (Bling!)

-   *F: 嗯！冇錯啦！舌頭收到信號 就會經大腦分析, 然後就會感受到不
       同既味道啦！咦！咪住先！愛麗斯！你係度食緊人地間屋？！

A: 咦！開左門喎！(奸奸地) (開門)

F: 喂！！！等埋我呀！！！ （跟住飛埋入去）

W: (奸笑) 嘿嘿! 你終於上到黎啦!

   你竟然 夠膽 傷害我棵仙人掌!?

A: (驚嚇) 你係邊個呀?

W: 我要將你變成粒糖!! (揮魔杖)

F: 唔好傷害愛麗斯呀!

（慢動作 － F踢開W的手,魔光從魔鏡反射, 誤中自己)

W: 呀!!!!!(變成粒糖)

C: 呀呀~

(烏鴉叫+飛走)

Last: (2個大頭出現)
F: 小朋友！你記唔記得岩岩學過既大腦知識呢？
A: 嗯～d糖真係好好食呀 （大頭出現在鏡頭）

F: 愛麗斯！你係度又食糖！（跑走）(delete script of decayed tooth->avoid to bring out other impression)

We reduced one sense in scene one,

and simplified some of scripts. 

Karis : Colored the forest scene

Kayan : Props drawing (brain sheet)

Alice : Drew the new storyboard

Pui Him : Found the reference of brain

Beanstalk

Beanstalk(Front)

Beanstalk(Top)

5layers (a little vibration in scene3)

Magic Light(Witch)

Magic light in Scene4

Witch Candy Sculpture

Sound effect list

Scene1 :  少少森林聲，Bling, paper, 吉到手個聲，丫丫拍翼聲
Scene2：魔鏡d magic聲，飛豆聲
Scene3：風聲，少少呼吸聲
Scene4：口水聲，食糖聲，開門聲，揮魔杖聲，魔鏡反射聲，射中左聲

Other drawing of character

34front of character

Cactus

Refine the color of witch

Version1

Not outstanding enough

Version2

 Add the highlight and shadow to witch's face
->more sharp

Version3

The cloth is brighter

Version4

Add red eye shadow

->more evil

Refine the appearance of fairy

Version1

Too many details.

Version2

Reduce the black lines.

Dress-> more simple.