Step's comment 15/7

1. Character’s mouth shape can be more detailed
2. More sound effects should be added
3. Treat the bitmap image problem
4. Test more colored version of props
5. Edit the length of animation (our animation is too long)

Animation:
6. Character's facial expression need to be a bit more detailed
7. Fairy should look at audience while explaining
8. The story distracted the part of knowledge

Presentation:
9. Only final version of the storyboard should be put in the powerpoint

to be continued

Comment-30/6

1 More close up

2 have response between the characters

3 outstand the personality of character

-> Alice is curious, she always say (咩黎架, 咩黎架, 好靚啊!!)

4 fairy should gives response when Alice asks her every time

5 (哎呀) in scene1 is too suddenly 

-> close up Alice’s hand and face

6 give close up to (丫丫), give him a position to stand

7 think about (丫丫) how to send message to witch

-> we use a fallen flower and (丫丫)’s shout to show that

8 the relationship between magic bean and witch is too far

-> show the scene of throwing bean

9 more angles to show Alice is climbing, from top to bottom

10 fairy should clarifies Alice can’t do what