Comment-30/6

1 More close up

2 have response between the characters

3 outstand the personality of character

-> Alice is curious, she always say (咩黎架, 咩黎架, 好靚啊!!)

4 fairy should gives response when Alice asks her every time

5 (哎呀) in scene1 is too suddenly 

-> close up Alice’s hand and face

6 give close up to (丫丫), give him a position to stand

7 think about (丫丫) how to send message to witch

-> we use a fallen flower and (丫丫)’s shout to show that

8 the relationship between magic bean and witch is too far

-> show the scene of throwing bean

9 more angles to show Alice is climbing, from top to bottom

10 fairy should clarifies Alice can’t do what